Thursday, 31 March 2016

My special place

My special place 
The rocks make gigantic water fountains squirt out water when I come in,
Light yellow sands shines in the wind,
My three best friends play and jump around,
Colorful water balloons zaps in the air then spreads water around the park,
The humongous playground surrounds the park like a fence,
The blurry,stinky smoke rises up into the air
This is my special place.




2 comments:

  1. "Colorful water balloons zaps in the air then spreads water around the park", what an interesting way to describe how the water balloons are moving. Kiri

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  2. When you wrote " gigantic water fountain " it made me feel like I was experiencing it with you"

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